Heh.
I don't know how, kid, but you managed to hit all the right buttons with this flash. The comedic timing was excellent, and the jokes in the background really helped. The drawing style was a perfect balance of simple and whimsical. As for your voice, well, it wasn't great, but the quality is clean and you enunciate well. I imagine you'll grow into it in a few years.
Overall, you seem like a promising flash artist with plenty of potential for growth. Keep at it.