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I'm not sure you know what Tourette's is.

But I'm sure plenty of other people will be getting on your case about that, so I'll let them do the work.

The concept was mildly amusing: A T-rex with anger management problems who can't do anything because his arms are just tiny stumps. However, there's not much payoff to it, as all the jokes are rather predictable and kind of just blend together after a while. The only joke you seemed to be milking was the way the T-rex roared at ear-shattering levels every time he got mad, which really gets old after a while. And then there's the ending. Not only did it make no sense, but it used a shitting joke for no apparent reason. All said, it really misses the mark.

danielssssoso responds:

lol ok

How delightfully offensive.

At least the animation quality is passable, and it's not completely unfunny, so yeah, okay.

*PROTECTED*

AdorableDinosaur responds:

Thanks man

Heh.

I don't know how, kid, but you managed to hit all the right buttons with this flash. The comedic timing was excellent, and the jokes in the background really helped. The drawing style was a perfect balance of simple and whimsical. As for your voice, well, it wasn't great, but the quality is clean and you enunciate well. I imagine you'll grow into it in a few years.

Overall, you seem like a promising flash artist with plenty of potential for growth. Keep at it.

JulianCheese responds:

Thanks - decided I'd put more effort into easter eggs.

And yes, I know my voice is vocal garbage, but I think it might have just sounded weird this once.

Your spelling needs work.

What I find most distressing is the fact that the most spelling errors occur in the first part, which is basically a word-for-word reproduction of the original commercial (which is presented entirely in written words). You could have very easily compared your in-progress work to the original, side-by-side, to catch any spelling errors, and you didn't.

It reeks of laziness.

Rynious responds:

Dude, the is no spelling errors. You might Think there is because the words are handwritten and a little unclear. But if you had seen the original commercial you would understand a bit better on why I hand wrote it

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